Invention: You had good, concrete examples of why you embody the American dream. Arrangement: Points were placed strategically. Style: You used good, catchy phrases and employed some stylistic devices. Memory: You stumbled over your words a few times, but overall it was good. Delivery: You needed to make more eye contact, and you looked and sounded like the typical, stuck up, condescending rich dude from Wall Street or Silicon Valley. Maybe it would be more effective to make yourself look and sound like a normal person, in jeans and a button down or something like that?
Invention: You definitely incorporated yourself into the speech and endorsed your candidate well. Arrangement: You arranged your speech quite nicely. Though it sounded a lot like Obama's speech.. Style: Good! Memory: Good! You didn't have any major mess ups. Delivery: Well, despite not wearing the fedora, you looked good! You could definitely work on more eye contact. Though I find it difficult talking to a little light on my computer..
Invention: You had good, concrete examples of why you embody the American dream.
ReplyDeleteArrangement: Points were placed strategically.
Style: You used good, catchy phrases and employed some stylistic devices.
Memory: You stumbled over your words a few times, but overall it was good.
Delivery: You needed to make more eye contact, and you looked and sounded like the typical, stuck up, condescending rich dude from Wall Street or Silicon Valley. Maybe it would be more effective to make yourself look and sound like a normal person, in jeans and a button down or something like that?
Invention: You definitely incorporated yourself into the speech and endorsed your candidate well.
ReplyDeleteArrangement: You arranged your speech quite nicely. Though it sounded a lot like Obama's speech..
Style: Good!
Memory: Good! You didn't have any major mess ups.
Delivery: Well, despite not wearing the fedora, you looked good! You could definitely work on more eye contact. Though I find it difficult talking to a little light on my computer..