Invention: Good family of story, but you didn’t connect the dots and say why that reflected well on Romney. Arrangement: Good for the most part, but the mentions of abortion towards the start were a bit random and out of place. Maybe you were saying another word and I was just mishearing you, though. The audio, if I were to give it a sound check, would have been an 8—it was a little fuzzy. Style: Good repetition of key phrases. Memory: You didn’t stumble over words much at all, and you were able to make lots of eye contact. Delivery: Fell back on the same gesture with your right hand, raising and lowering it quickly in a staccato. That said, you had good eye contact, sincerity, and vocal variety.
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ReplyDeleteInvention: Good family of story, but you didn’t connect the dots and say why that reflected well on Romney.
ReplyDeleteArrangement: Good for the most part, but the mentions of abortion towards the start were a bit random and out of place. Maybe you were saying another word and I was just mishearing you, though. The audio, if I were to give it a sound check, would have been an 8—it was a little fuzzy.
Style: Good repetition of key phrases.
Memory: You didn’t stumble over words much at all, and you were able to make lots of eye contact.
Delivery: Fell back on the same gesture with your right hand, raising and lowering it quickly in a staccato. That said, you had good eye contact, sincerity, and vocal variety.