Sunday, September 9, 2012

Political Speech

Here's hoping this works this time around ... Safari had a bit of a meltdown on me the first time I tried to post this.

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  1. David ChristensenSeptember 12, 2012 at 7:49 AM

    Invention: Good job tying your story into supporting your candidate.
    Arrangement: Towards the end, you started talking about lots of random stuff that wasn’t related to your story.
    Style: There were some dry spots, but there were also spurts of poetic language.
    Memory: You stumbled over your words a few times, but overall good.
    Delivery: You weren’t very confident.

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